part 3 of my not so short fanfic. i expect to do around 10 chapters now, but i guess we will see how people like it, either way, still looking for some help on indentation. please comment and tell me what you think. also forgot legal shit before.

mlp:fim belongs to, and is trademarked by hasbro, lauren faust, and whoever else.

preview pictures are courtesy of general zoi's new pony creator beta.

ideas are mine, but use them if ya want, i aint a dick. i'd probably be honoured that someone thought they were good.

and yeah, enjoy.